the icarus child story

so what dus everyone think of this idea, to help u learn more about the game i write a novel kind of thing, the idea is the prologue is third person seeing a general face the first hordes of the Cariac and through him u see your birth, then its first person with you as you fight ht ewar and get promoted and shiit

im thinking u become a powerful general and a main AI in the game, and determine some stuff, so like tho ur the son of hte gods in the game ur a general in the story

ok so i have finished the prologue, though its not perfect its pretty cool

I don't have the attenion pance to read it all aTm, but i'll read it all later, i read the 1st page, pretty epic so far.

oh it gets better haha

sounds epic..

Looks epic, I've been up for 24 hours and 4 minutes, and killed my friend 472 times on MW2, got 40 promotions. so yeah... I'll read it some time tomorrow.

sweeet just reply honestly wen u read it and yeer just tell me what u think

Honestly, I think it has a bit too much.....

as in from what point of view

well I think the game has too much stuff it.

It's too complicated.

this isnt the game that was the prologue for the novel to help undersand the game

Oh.....nevermind.

haha, so did u think it was good as a prelogue,

Yup. It was a good story

thank you

No probs.

LOL..the last 5 posts or so were all done by us. We're the only ones online right now.

haha wel i shud be at skl haha

haha that's funny

I really should read this hole thing.

ur the best for reading and stuff and i want to finish improvements ont his before i go to chapter one

Well it doesn't want to work (i don't actually have a working word possessor [e.g MS word]) on the comp, but I'm going out I'll read it then.

ok thanks

Sorry guys, but when did you guys add the "drone" ranks?

why?? its a bit off topic haha and i was a drone ages ago u still got like 2 ranks before catching up to me

erm theres a topic with all the ranks in them and the drone ranks have been around a while