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Post by Skembri on Fri Aug 27, 2010 11:47 pm

so what dus everyone think of this idea, to help u learn more about the game i write a novel kind of thing, the idea is the prologue is third person seeing a general face the first hordes of the Cariac and through him u see your birth, then its first person with you as you fight ht ewar and get promoted and shiit

im thinking u become a powerful general and a main AI in the game, and determine some stuff, so like tho ur the son of hte gods in the game ur a general in the story


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Post by Skembri on Sat Aug 28, 2010 10:50 pm

ok so i have finished the prologue, though its not perfect its pretty cool Very Happy


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Post by Caboose on Sat Aug 28, 2010 11:09 pm

I don't have the attenion pance to read it all aTm, but i'll read it all later, i read the 1st page, pretty epic so far.
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Post by Skembri on Sun Aug 29, 2010 12:00 am

oh it gets better haha


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Post by Mr.Borg on Sun Aug 29, 2010 3:17 am

sounds epic..


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Post by Caboose on Sun Aug 29, 2010 6:51 am

Looks epic, I've been up for 24 hours and 4 minutes, and killed my friend 472 times on MW2, got 40 promotions. so yeah... I'll read it some time tomorrow.
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Post by Skembri on Sun Aug 29, 2010 9:50 am

sweeet just reply honestly wen u read it and yeer just tell me what u think


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Post by Mr.Borg on Mon Aug 30, 2010 11:15 am

Honestly, I think it has a bit too much.....



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Post by Skembri on Mon Aug 30, 2010 3:46 pm

as in from what point of view


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Post by Mr.Borg on Tue Aug 31, 2010 2:58 am

well I think the game has too much stuff it.

It's too complicated.


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Post by Skembri on Tue Aug 31, 2010 8:11 am

this isnt the game that was the prologue for the novel to help undersand the game


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Post by Mr.Borg on Tue Aug 31, 2010 8:47 am

Oh.....nevermind.


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Post by Skembri on Tue Aug 31, 2010 8:48 am

haha, so did u think it was good as a prelogue,


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Post by Mr.Borg on Tue Aug 31, 2010 8:49 am

Yup. It was a good story


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Post by Skembri on Tue Aug 31, 2010 8:54 am

thank you Smile


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Post by Mr.Borg on Tue Aug 31, 2010 9:10 am

No probs.

LOL..the last 5 posts or so were all done by us. We're the only ones online right now.


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Post by Skembri on Tue Aug 31, 2010 9:14 am

haha wel i shud be at skl haha


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Post by Mr.Borg on Tue Aug 31, 2010 9:21 am

haha that's funny


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Post by Caboose on Tue Aug 31, 2010 3:01 pm

I really should read this hole thing.
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Post by Skembri on Tue Aug 31, 2010 6:38 pm

ur the best for reading and stuff and i want to finish improvements ont his before i go to chapter one


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Post by Caboose on Tue Aug 31, 2010 6:53 pm

Well it doesn't want to work (i don't actually have a working word possessor [e.g MS word]) on the comp, but I'm going out I'll read it then.
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Post by Skembri on Tue Aug 31, 2010 10:13 pm

ok thanks


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Post by Mr.Borg on Wed Sep 01, 2010 1:45 am

Sorry guys, but when did you guys add the "drone" ranks?


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Post by Skembri on Wed Sep 01, 2010 10:33 pm

why?? its a bit off topic haha and i was a drone ages ago u still got like 2 ranks before catching up to me


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Post by SilverShadows on Wed Sep 01, 2010 11:38 pm

erm theres a topic with all the ranks in them and the drone ranks have been around a while


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