intro text for single player version

Flashtrek Broken mirror V

(storyline)
2 years ago you where a second luitenant, navigating under Captain David J. Schembri, of the starship Ossirus, you where part of the final brigade being launched into war with the klingons. a sense was in the air, the kind that you hadnt sensed in a long time, a sense of hope, victory, and even better peace. but an accident ocured your warp broke down and you found yourself trapped in black space (empty space with no planets or anything) after two long hours your ships sensors picked up a black hole so in an attempt to escape you find that due to huge impact damages your sensers where wrong about the distance and as you attempted to escape it was to late, you where dragged into this black hole.
A day later you woke up and after alot of confussion find out you were in a gate hole rather than a black hole, a gate hole is technology that creates a black hole from a parrelel universe to examin whats in other parrelel universes, dragged in you find your entire crew died on impact and you had only just survived.

(stardate April 5th 2397)
Stuck in this parele world you hand over asll of the tech and save the planet from, an imanent alien attack, and quickly became a captain. These alien attacks had been coming regulaly, and after a few trips you find they are known as the scehmbrite, a large, fowl race, intent on dominating the universe. This race had conqured all of the old klingon sectors, and the cardassion sectors. Quicklally the cardassions left scattered in ruins to random planets, and the klingons where forced onto scattered planets.

With empires crumbling and a huge a attack iminent it is up to you to lead the human race, allied with the commonwealth of united planets, to victory, and to salvation.

(January 1st 2400)
welcom to the 39th centuary, gear up for combat, this wars going to be tough

Nice...sence is spelt sense and some grammer is wrong...

yeh i didnt want to point that out but you have, so ive dodged a bullet

lol i knew there would be spelling mistakes but what im asking is do you like the single player storyline

in the multiplayer, you wold be in the same universe only you would be from that universe

It's good.

kool thanks

good, only it doesnt sound so epic, i dont know y... it just doesnt unlike the descriptions in BM1-3

imsure we can work that out

yes this game is still in early development stages

January 1, 2400 would be in the 41st century, not the 39th.

Wait what??? isn't 2400 the 25th century? I'm so confused..

yeh im pretty sure its 25th unless we skipped a 1000 years without me noticing

Yea... how the hell did you guys get 39th and 41st? 39th century would be 3800 and 41st would be 4000

dont ask me i didnt do it

I didn't, I was asking them

I really don't understand some parts because of grammatical errors but its a good start. I read the whole thing. The plot isn't bad but the writing needs to be worked on a little more.

yup try adding stuff to it to make it go from good to great