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Sun Oct 24, 2010 4:47 am
on stardate 21.32.3 The Federation ship Renegade was on a mission to make peace with the Tholian syndicate.

Captains Log - We are just 10 hours away from Tholia and i hope this mission shall be a succes since the Dominion attack has left the Federation weak and we need all the allies it can get.

10 hours later

Ensign - Captain we are at tholia and..........and (The ensign is shocked at what he see's) Captain you will wanna see this.

Captain - on screen OMG what happened here half of Tholia is scorched. What happened here.... wait what is that is it a ship or debris.

Ensign - Yes Captain. Wait there are 2 no 3, 4, 11, 19 no wait Shocked 30 the fleet is made up of Vulcan, Klingon, Romulan, Tholian and Federation ships.

Captain - WHAT. Half of the races of these ships arent even allies why are they in a fleet together.

Luitenant - CAPTAIN ALL 30 SHIPS ARE POWERING WEAPONS.

Captain - Raise Shields. Evasive manuvers arm torpedos 1 through 10. aim phasers at leading ships.

Luitenant - Sir there firing. ahh sir shields have droped to 91%, 84%, 72%

Captain - Return Fire. HAIL THEM

Ensign - No response. Captain shields down to 52%, 39%, 31%

Captain - FIRE TORPEDOS 1 THROUGH 10 AT THE LEADING SHIPS AND KEEP FIRING PHASERS.

Luitenant - Yes sir firing torpedos 1 through 10. 3 shuttles destroyed 2 cruisers took minimal damage.

Ensign - Captain we have to flee.

Captain - Very well take us out.

As the ship was about to go to warp 2 Pirate ships fired a electronic pulse at the Warp field and 1 of the pirate ships fired a torpedo with the same kind of frequencie that hit the ship. Next thing the crew new the ship was being hurtled through a strange kind of warp field.

To find out what happens next check Rise of the Pirates (Part 2)
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Sun Oct 24, 2010 4:48 am
part 2 wil be out in a day or maybe today if i have time
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Sun Oct 24, 2010 4:56 am
you could make it that people just add onto what you wrote in this thread
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Sun Oct 24, 2010 5:00 am
no cause i got a plot for it. dont want it that what next person write they get destroyed do i
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Sun Oct 24, 2010 5:13 am
actually you could destroy it and just go to another ship following their trail or something like the USS Invincible
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Sun Oct 24, 2010 5:13 am
i would do that
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Sun Oct 24, 2010 5:18 am
nan im gonna make it a realy good plot look for part 2 in 15 or so minutes i got time to make it

(Im new and making a series already)
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Sun Oct 24, 2010 5:36 am
ok thats fine i might make a series myself.
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Sun Oct 24, 2010 5:40 am
before the end of today i hope to have made part 3
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Sun Oct 24, 2010 6:21 am
That was pretty fun to read more plz Very Happy
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Sun Oct 24, 2010 6:24 am
My series has now been Made Smile
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Sun Oct 24, 2010 6:27 am
whats it called them ill check it out also part 2 and 3 of mine are out

and i sent you a friend request
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Sun Oct 24, 2010 9:28 am
dude this is cool i hope to see more
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