Bm2 Advertisment Complete

www.thebrokenmirror.webs.com the completed advert tell me what you think

have you actually changed it at all ?

waatch it

Not to sound harsh or anything, but, it's not very good....I don't know any other way to put this...i just don't think it looks very professional or good. It looks like it was slapped together in 5 minutes...i mean, where to start;

The backgrounds, the orange and purple things...whats up with those? they look a bit crap tbh :S and they don't let you read the text as it goes white in the middle, which is what colour the text is.
The BM symbol, when it spinds it is very obviously being reset each time it spins - makes it look amature when you should give a professional finish to it.
A lot of the effects were unnecessary, and just made it look basic and amature.

I'm sorry but i would just imagine an 'ad' for any BM game to be of high quality, like DW's.

I think you needed to hear it straight, because if i don't tell you, then when other people see it they'll tell you...en mass.

Maybe you should let josh do it?

i did one but i wasnt sure what it should say but overwise ive already got one

sweet

tbh foofong it was a five min job and i think its alrite i could make it better im replaceing the spinning bit anyway and i'll just remake i from scratch

but i need some other screenshots

ill try to get some other screen shots

add my msn
neils_lawn_cutting@hotmail.com
if u have msn

I am sorry i sounded harsh, but not sorry about the point i was making.

I'm not trying to discourage you from doing stuff just maybe let josh do it on this one?

if he wants to do it thats fine if you want to see what i did ill show you

thats just the one vex did with ur pics on it

yes and no but is got new text aswell darkwing also used vexs

i used it on my other project and tbh its not even that good

ah well its not finished that just a starting point

how did u get it onto the forum??

i uploaded it to my old site and used the address to stream the flash. but ive decided im gonna make a completely new video on the lines of dark wings

Guys if you want I can send the URL bm2complete webs...to google server..and lots oters.

bm2complete.webs? were brokenmirror.forummotion.co.uk now i think i posted bm2 complete on google i dont know if they accepted

I can get it on like 6 different serch engines.

ok good idea that should increase our members

can i just say when i do what you told me tyo with streaming it from my site it just ses (when right cliked) movie not loadeed and it doesnt load

you click on in in your frewebs libary and it opens another page and gopy and paste that addres in to the box thingy

yeh its a lot better than the old one not sure about the font but yeah its good

ill give u the source code if u want to keep that but change the font otherwise i cba with it