- CabooseAdmiral
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Join date : 2010-05-12
Age : 28
Location : Some ware, in the UK
Project: Pravus
Fri Jul 16, 2010 6:22 am
This is the new topic for Project; pravus(Project: Too many)
Several things,
Several thousand human escaped, from earth from the Iliad,in 4 Executor SSD like looking city ships. there insides look like the Citadel (mass effect 2) Thou on some parts of the civilian ship they look like Omega(mass effect 2)
One ship is owned by the US Army,another by the Royal Navy, the last by Civilians of many nations, the 4th landed on a planet and tried to make a civilization, there fate is left unknown. the average ships is 20 km long and only houses 5,000 people, thou there maxim compliment is more around several million.
the Royal navy ship seems to be the most advanced of them all, but that may only be that they have more knowledge on the ships than the others.
Command structure of the navy ship.
Commander-in-chief- Fleet Admiral Hood.
Chief of-Staff Admiral Lexington
Chief-of-resources Admiral Patterson
some others ranks held by 3 others admirals
and several lower proity ranks held by lower ranking staff.
Skrembri is doing the 4th ship which tried to colonise a planet
And I'm doing what made them leave Earth and life on the Naval ship, which I need to name.
1st draft of 1st chapter of The Silent Pravus: survival
The Silent Prarvus
Survival
Skrembri feel free to edit this
Several things,
Several thousand human escaped, from earth from the Iliad,in 4 Executor SSD like looking city ships. there insides look like the Citadel (mass effect 2) Thou on some parts of the civilian ship they look like Omega(mass effect 2)
One ship is owned by the US Army,another by the Royal Navy, the last by Civilians of many nations, the 4th landed on a planet and tried to make a civilization, there fate is left unknown. the average ships is 20 km long and only houses 5,000 people, thou there maxim compliment is more around several million.
the Royal navy ship seems to be the most advanced of them all, but that may only be that they have more knowledge on the ships than the others.
Command structure of the navy ship.
Commander-in-chief- Fleet Admiral Hood.
Chief of-Staff Admiral Lexington
Chief-of-resources Admiral Patterson
some others ranks held by 3 others admirals
and several lower proity ranks held by lower ranking staff.
Skrembri is doing the 4th ship which tried to colonise a planet
And I'm doing what made them leave Earth and life on the Naval ship, which I need to name.
1st draft of 1st chapter of The Silent Pravus: survival
The Silent Prarvus
Survival
- Spoiler:
- In an unknown location, in a lighting light room, several Navy officer's speak among them self, There Uniform is not a familiar one, they all have a golden ring round there left arm pit, signifying Admiralty, each one having two to four stars on there shoulders, the last one at the end of the table an elderly man with a grey goatee, had 5 stars on his shoulder meaning he as the highest ranking one there.
A knock at the door was herd, and they all fell silent. The elderly man spoke “Come in,” the door opened and a rather a lieutenant came in obliviously nervous, “sir, Sir” he muttered “get on with it” the Elderly man said again. He said “Sorry Admirals,” she got several files out from under his arm. He handed one to all of the 6 Admirals.
One Admiral and rather overweight, Asked ware there dinner was, “ is that all you think about Preston?” the Elder Admiral asked, Preston didn't respond and dug his head into the file. “Admiral Hood sir,” The Elder man now identified as Admiral Hood. Grand/Fleet Admiral to be precise, responded, “What is it we don't have lot of time.” he said hoping not to be a drain on resources, “The hope district, Sir, many people are complaining about lack of security. I was hoping you'd Improve security.”, he said rather nervously. Hood breathed in and replied” I'll see what I can do” “oh thank you Sir,”
The Lieutenant left, the room, the other room as guarded by several armed men, he went over to a window, and looked out side of it. Seeing a City the size of a small country that houses only several thousand people, and it's location thousands of light years a way from earth. He could also see 2 other ships of the same size, they both have the same fate of this ship. He started having a Flash back of when he was only a teenager, back on earth, When the Iliad 1st came to earth. A guard came over and asked him to move along.
Skrembri feel free to edit this
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