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Alternate Future Ideas

on Fri Nov 05, 2010 9:01 am
Pretty much I'm wanting to give crewmen actual names, as opposed to just putting random quotes around, to make dialogue less confusing. But I am horrible with names, i don't know how authors do it. So i need names for a few captains, a few crewmen (and crewwomen) and maybe some alien defectors.

Also maybe a few good ship names too, and station names.

Thanks in advance.
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Re: Alternate Future Ideas

on Fri Nov 05, 2010 9:05 am
also, in comments to the actual writings, feel free to write a few of my contradictions (as in I caught myself a few times writing about the Indestructible, which blew up, as opposed to the Firestorm, the main ship. I also occasionally called the Indestructible the Invincible, which was not right
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Re: Alternate Future Ideas

on Sat Nov 06, 2010 2:39 am
You can't just keep destroying and adding ships, all the time, neither can you Heroise a ship. You need to line out your main characters, and secondaries, then your universe, then do your ship, after that develop your characters so we understand them, and remember to Be detailed, don't just say somethink happened.

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Re: Alternate Future Ideas

on Sat Nov 06, 2010 12:10 pm
thats why I need names, at least for the character parts. I'm actually better with the larger, ship battle aspects than the small, personal aspects.
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Re: Alternate Future Ideas

on Sat Nov 06, 2010 5:30 pm
Can you contain it to 2 topics, the discussion/idea's topic, and the topic that has the story, please dont just make a new topic every time you make a new post, its really annoying and chews up space.


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