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lyric choice

Post by Skembri on Fri Jul 02, 2010 2:00 am

now onto a random bit of lyrics i idid, i ned to choose a verse to give tosome competition which my gf whose red all my lyrics convinced me to join, but i want more opinoins.. which lyric is better?? btw i can only put a verse in so i had to cooose so now im asking u to choose for me....


and time for my last say
well that is for today
u think i dont
but i understand the way
the youth think
and how discrimination against gays
the people and the afraid
u think i dont cos im me
well ive probably seen
more *this word has been censored* in my life than most of u
could ever have a dream
or nightmare ha and there
i see the way u free
the slaves of everyday society
and deep inside of me
i cry so i express my beliefs
against murderers and theifs
criminals hidden amongst u and me
the rich the kings and the queen
or our lives and in our dream
and dadies lil princess is seen
we think its cute but never to believe
that we cud ever make it or be
the next eminem or billy G
no ones perfect, so much obesity
so much greed going on inside of the
western society
third world countries suffering
for absalutely nothing
yet still smile and find somthing
to rejoice and then there praying
thanking the lord, and never saying
they want more than a droppa water
so yer think what you got for the
we find the lord and say that ya
rejoice for the choices made in the
warzone, destroying my home and laf
cos u still got family, clean water man
dont ever get down feeling bad cos ur life is sad
im telling u i know its hard
but keep it straight and real
and always see the deal
ya making with lifes wheel
spinning around, starting to feel
dizzy, sissy so keep it real

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and now u have the guts
stand there and fuk
everything which loves
manipulating sluts
leaving scars not cuts
as the old guy tuts
and he fuks
some paid for slut
and we wonder why this economy
wont fuking honour the
united military
and all these colonies
and third world countries
left in mass poverty
leaving them no money
killing them with STD's
passed down by all the
western societies
who enslaved every
single fuking wanna be
into the anarchy
of world wide slavery
i promise it aint just me
who sees the irony
behind the iraqi
invasion to save or free
the western colonies
from weapons of the
mass destruction cant u see
one corrupted party
leading the world to the
judgement day to free
inocent souls
from the demented goals
of the brand new laws
covering the fors
but ingoring the cons
baby it is just wrong
disgracing the song
and blackening our front
yer weve waited to long


excuse the language both were written by mee, an both are rap


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Post by Skembri on Fri Jul 02, 2010 2:04 am

btw the topic was war and injustice so these arent my best but there the best i have for that topic


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Post by Genix Warrior on Fri Jul 02, 2010 4:19 am

Number 2 for me.
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Post by SilverShadows on Sun Jul 04, 2010 6:22 am

yeh i dont know anything about music so yeh theyre both good


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Post by Genix Warrior on Sun Jul 04, 2010 3:57 pm

You don't know anything about music?
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Post by SilverShadows on Sun Jul 04, 2010 10:08 pm

not really i know what music i enjoy and stuff but not what makes a good song and stuff like that


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Post by Genix Warrior on Mon Jul 05, 2010 4:07 am

oH,So you are classed as average.
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