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Project: Too Many

on Sat Jun 19, 2010 10:06 pm
this si the staging area for mine and Skembri's Crusade.
only made this since it was clotting up my redemption discussion
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Re: Project: Too Many

on Sat Jun 19, 2010 11:03 pm
Ex-President Barrack Hussein Obama of the Old governments once said; the past is sealed, the future has not been decided, it is only that of the present we control, use our knowledge and experience of the past to mold a better future for us all. (two weeks before he was assasinated by "lightless dawn" a group of middle eastern extremists, in 2017)

back then things were more black and white, even in the confusion of the first Tarrac wars we could still see things clearly, but he was right, president obama, their choices and actions shaped our future. The war with the middle eastern terrorrist groups was only the beggining of somthing much worse. Obama pledged to end the taliban's terror over the middle east, and with that he launched hundreds of missiles towards the suspected safe houses of the terorist groups around the middle east, with no regard towards civilian safety, even at that point the human governments of the middle eastern realms remained calm, but on july 20th 2014 an intellegence force picked up the plans signed to go by Barrack obama, called operation middle eastern restart (OMER) these plans specified targeted zones where the americans had aimed to launch nuclear attacks, over 70 nukes, were prepared to be launched, and he didnt even care about his own mens lives. Exactly 3 days later he was kiked out of office, along with the british pm, and many co conspirasists, including 7 members of the EU. But Asia was sick of the western cultures and there lack of care, morales, diciplin and created the Asian Republic Union (ARU). They created a military capable of wiping out europe in months, and launched to america, obviously america called to their allies, and
WWIII began, it was only due to Asia's lack of training, technology and tactical skill that they had not wiped out america in a few weeks, but the war waged on and slowly the world, stopped surviving, daily bombongs on hundreds of countries, by different sidesm and the constant invasions, caused desiese and plague, slowly Human kind fell, as finally america was wiped out the EU was the only stronghold left for the western society, with one last push through asia europe fell, and only three empires remained on earth, Australia, Africa and the ARU. England was now ruled by martial law, had one more secret weapon, a peice of technology found and studied called the F15-49 a ship about the size of a basic jet, sheilded, advanced weaponary, and enhanced engines, since 1992 it had been studied, and in 2009 it was re-created eacch peice one by one, finished in 2013 creating two of the these ships, once testing proved positive the british military moved the F15-49 to an island south of Ireland now owned by the military, they had recreated about 30 of them, by 2018 the year the world fell. these ships destroyed the majority of asia leaving them destroyed.

after that the humans went dark, to rebuild, no planes, through fear of being shot down, only boats hidden by the fog of the waters, humanity had fallen at its own hands.

years passed, slowly so did decades, the world got more and more busy, but not by humans, colonies of an alien species the Tarrac, running from their home world due to an unstobable evil, the creators of the F15-49, and owning large numbers of ships they created metropolisis, without even the slightest realisation that humans were on the planet, they built above america, Japan and many other once great nations. once we finally found them as we were forced to expand due to population, they enslaved us and for many long and painful years humanity lived as slave to this race, but finally we waed rebelions upon this race and after commandearing about 30 of thier ships we opened fire on their cities, and were
foced to relocate.

we are now a small race of approximatly 140 million living on a new planet out in the middle of a new solar system, maybe even a new galaxy, we know little of space, and the technology, we stole from the Tarrac we didnt fully understand, but we survived, we stripped all the ships and rebuilt a city off their technology, new weapons, advancements beyond our dreams, yet still we fear what tomorow may bring, we named this new planet Ares the greek god of war, and we are lead in a timocratic society, reflecting that of which our military does, to our community. Following our hero, General Peter scherte.


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Re: Project: Too Many

on Sat Jun 19, 2010 11:17 pm
that's really good, really really good, it put the Terrans in a highly advanced state but they've no understanding of this technology.

I'm thinking about there ships, being around the size of a Corvette (around 200 meters or less) and they class these 200 meter long ships Dreadnoughts ect. since I'll being going to bed soon I'll have my part up by tomorrow.

also change the name of the F15-49 to F-75, F-15-49 sounds sot chesses
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Re: Project: Too Many

on Sat Jun 19, 2010 11:21 pm
ok sweet as and thankss

these guys dont have much undertanding of this tech or the ships, they no navigation and ahve full access to the ship but there undersandind is simular to the people on SGA when they first arrived on atlantis


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Re: Project: Too Many

on Sat Jun 19, 2010 11:26 pm
as I'm saying they don't understand space travel (as it's "impossible" to some fanatic who think god put them on Herra[name of planet] )
and all they basically can do is make SG styles ship but with out the extra galactic hyperdrive and APMWs ect and they can't make a ship that can't re enter a planet so once it's in space it's there for ever
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Re: Project: Too Many

on Sat Jun 19, 2010 11:39 pm
(note the stuff in this post will be expanding apon later)

Planet Ares of Valor Sector
4 continents
10 contires
23 major cities
4 super- Sea liners (some people prefer to live in these than the cities)
5 major factions
2 minor factions

when i get back up sometime .. when ever that is I'll right a paragraph for them all,and add ships station ect
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Re: Project: Too Many

on Sun Jun 20, 2010 1:30 pm
oh well i was more thinking it was just a colony or country but ccool, and the valor sector, whats that???

ok make an address like so, Universe alpha, milky way galaxy, nectus cluster, quarent 6, friar system, planet Ares. but u choose it all

ok im gunna make a list of main characters about 50 different ones and add a short bio, nothing to extensive

im thinking maybe we need to form this novel based on the planet and its surrounding space, as they learn the dangeres and benifits of thier technology, and as that unkown evil strikes, that forced the Tarrac to land on earth, and maybe the attempts made to return home


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Re: Project: Too Many

on Sun Jun 20, 2010 5:22 pm
50 characters really need that many?

Also is this being set a few years they have been on Ares or pretty much as soon there on Ares?
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Re: Project: Too Many

on Sun Jun 20, 2010 8:20 pm
I want it to start on chapter one as when they first arrived, then skip after a few years on chapter two, i want chapter one to contain the fist contact with that race that attacked the Tarrac, the really evil race, and yer well this is what i got so far, and yer with the 50 characters its so you can use them for any circumstance, but its me doing them, and we dont have to use all of them



"don't live in fear of an action that has not struck, and do not be shamed by the mistakes of the past, let us learn of our errors and let us grow stronger, wiser and better then ever before. whether on earth or on Ares we are the Human race, we survived the romans, outlived the dinasoars, we are mankind and we will survive"
"oooaaaaah" the men and women of ares yelled, after General scherte leader of the new human race gave his speach to the 140 million humans listening across the planes and city of ares.
he walked off the platform and was aproached by sevral members of the military
"sir, permision to launch a team into the wild"
"for what reason?"
"we need to get food, water, and secure the immediate perimiter"
"how long will our current rations last?"
"Private Lyrat estimated another 20 weeks, maximum"
"well then you have 20 weeks to complete your ojectives, find a source of food, water and resources, that we can mine"
"thank you sir"
"I want you to check in every two hours, and any sign of non intellegent liforms, to be photographed, then left, and signs of intellegent life forms and you retreat back to base, immediatly, do u understand?"
"sir, yes sir"
"good, prep your team to leave you will be leaving at 0800 hours, good luck"


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Re: Project: Too Many

on Sun Jun 20, 2010 10:27 pm
ok now that i know I'm doing it a few years later that helps and I'm Channing few things anbd now i can't find a faction to make timocratic government

3 continents
unknown amount countries
x amount major cities
2 super- Sea liners (some people prefer to live in these than the cities)
3 major factions
2 minor factions

The continents are
New Europe, it the largest of all and looks more Africa than Europe.
New Russia, the 2ed largest but is mainly comprised of mountains and deserts(main source for most Raw materials)
New Asia, The Smallest of the 3 is mainly a large collection of multi mile long Islands

Countries
I'm not sure how many I'll be adding, but most will be re-named after older countries

Major Cites
most countries will have one or 2 of these

2 Super Sea-liners
Constructed not long after things got "settled" theses are the closest things to Luxury for some people, they both roam in neutral Waters and no nation lays clame to them, thou the Russian Federation made both of them, they can hold about 50,000 people.

Major factions
British Confederacy (B-Con/BC)
The British Confederacy, is made up of 4 region controlled each by an General (whit the exception of 1, which is controlled by an Admiral ). they are the most powerful Faction the only faction with a Space program and active ships. They Basically control the Planet politicly but militarily they don't. they amazing can do this while having the smallest population of 69million.
Russian Federation (Feds/RF)
The Russians like they did on Earth own the largest source of raw material other than Wood. they have an Alliance with the British but the Alliance is very shaky. they take pride in there creation of the Super-liners.
Asian Republican Union (ARU)
A coalition of Asian unions they started WWIII and were one of the surviving races of the Terrac War. they were also the 1st race to cause a war on Ares. they are currently struggling not to start another war with the British and over population with over 100million

Minor Factions
American Remnant.
Most of America was destroyed during the WWIII and the Terrac War, they managed to get several million people over. over the course there time on Ares they have have succeed on Ares by making New America An very big player in Economics but that's pretty much it.

Unified Nations of Korea (UNK)
after the end of WWIII there was large power gap and North Korea took advantage by building up it's military and annexing South Korea and several other nation not part of the ARU they soon became one of the more dominant super powers, but during the Terrac war they were brung back down to size.
When they came to Ares , they didn't succeed in the long time scale but soon be came one of the largest arm producers and all faction use this to there advantage

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Re: Project: Too Many

on Mon Jun 21, 2010 4:53 pm
first off its only been two years, there arent going to be tons of new factions, im thinking three tops, spread over 8-11 cities, split between a river or sea, the focuss is not diplomatic between nations its fcusing on the tarrac, and the race that nearly destroyed them. but yer pretty cool, im thinking maybe a map like this:


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Re: Project: Too Many

on Mon Jun 21, 2010 6:35 pm
ok I'm thinking to big that's all
and there no image
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Re: Project: Too Many

on Tue Jun 22, 2010 7:49 pm
urm images will be made soon and lol thinkingn big is good, but thinking specific is also good


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Re: Project: Too Many

on Tue Jun 22, 2010 8:04 pm
I'm currently trying to make a concept art for the Terrac Mother ship
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Re: Project: Too Many

on Tue Jun 22, 2010 9:40 pm
ok i can provide some ideas but there on elements so they wont be that good


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Re: Project: Too Many

on Tue Jun 22, 2010 10:49 pm
well all my concepts haven't been that good, so any ideas would be helpful
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Re: Project: Too Many

on Wed Jun 23, 2010 12:54 am
here's several ships designs, i want you to decide which one to base my concepts on

http://img181.imageshack.us/img181/6416/minmatarbattleshiphl8.jpg
http://www.ravestats.com/public/fen/0_ONI3.JPG
http://wiki.imperion.com/w/images/8/81/Terminator.png

I'm thinking each ship is around 20km long and 7km tall and 3 km in with
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Re: Project: Too Many

on Wed Jun 23, 2010 9:06 pm
this is bad i made it in like half an hour so the graphics arent that good but heres an idea, as its like original



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Re: Project: Too Many

on Wed Jun 23, 2010 10:04 pm
what was that made in?
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Re: Project: Too Many

on Fri Jun 25, 2010 12:37 pm
photoshop lol


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Re: Project: Too Many

on Fri Jun 25, 2010 9:38 pm
looks like you used 3dsoftware
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Re: Project: Too Many

on Fri Jun 25, 2010 10:56 pm
mm its the 3-d bit that screwed it up


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on Tue Jun 29, 2010 11:27 pm
General Peter scherte.
A WWIII veteran, he was the lead team member of the British F1-40 task force and lead the British alien ships across Asia to bomb their cities, he served 9 tours around the middle east and was recommended for the Victoria Cross, he was amongst the first humans of earth to occupy Tarrac mother ship and was quickly made the captain, during launch the British government's ship fell, forcing him him to take command, and making his ship the flag ship. He now leads the survivors of the human race on Ares.


General Joseph Mcinsy
A close friend of General Peter scherte having served in the same task force for 8 years, also a WWIII veteran, outranking General Peter scherte but due to an injury could not serve in the British alien ship bombings of Asia, he is now serving as an advisor to him. General Joseph Mcinsy was knighted for extraordinary service, above and beyond the call of duty.


Colonel Luke Sanders
A commended pilot, with aloft military training and background, grew up in a rough neighbourhood, enlisted in the military at the age of 17 passed through training at the age of 19 and was recommended for Brigadier on several occasions, but his mouth always let him down. He is gobby, and always tells it as he sees it, even if that means swearing at a ranking officer. He was second lead on the British alien bombings of Asia.


Lt. Colonel Rasdent Chesticuff
a ranking member of a Russian task force operating within Asia on behalf of the British military, he supplied information regarding upcoming attacks, saving countless British personnel and civilians. He is now part of Colonel Luke Sanders' team.


Lead Scientist stisar Myia'yack
A German scientist responsible for getting the Tarrac ships operational, without him the humans may not have been able to leave earth. He is now a respected and trusted ranking scientist on Ares, leading several operation to work out the full extent and power of the Tarrack technology's


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Re: Project: Too Many

on Wed Jun 30, 2010 4:29 am
Hey cool man, very nice nosepeace.
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Re: Project: Too Many

on Wed Jun 30, 2010 11:23 pm
thank you


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