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Post by Caboose on Wed Jun 09, 2010 10:22 am

Redemption Part 1

"Prepare to start Engines, 1 quarter we don't want to rip the dock apart as we leave" Sha'Karr asked as the Redemption slowly made its way out of a Dry dock.
"Weapons are fully operational, Engines are fully operational, Shields are at 100%, the Ship is fully operational Sir." An Elite said be hide his console.
"very good... very good. What the Status on the Regret and Harbinger?" Sha'Karr asked.
"both ships are in slip space coming to this position." the Elite replied
Just then 2 CSS-Class Cruiser dropped out of Slip space in front of the Redemption. they come up on the IFF as the Regret and Harbinger.
"hail the Regret" Sha'Karr ordered.
The Redemptions hail went throw to the regret.
"Fall into Formation and prepare for Slip space jump, I'm transferring the coordinates to you now." Sha'Karr said as his pressed a few buttons on his command chair.
The Harbinger and Regret formed a Arrow formation whit the Redemption at the tip of the Arrow. all 3 ships prepared there Slip space drives. double checked there coordinates and jumped to the designated coordinates.
it had been several hours since the fleet jumped and Sha'Karr had changed into his battle Armor, a highly decorated Bronze/Golden color with large shoulder pads. He had an energy sword on his right holder and a plasma pistol on his left, Followed by two guards carrying Carbines and wearing Commando Armor. it was clear now that Sha'Karr was going to do a ground op. he slowly made his way to the hangar bay while briefing his fellow Elite Commandos on what they are to do. When they reached the hangar bay it could be seen that an army had been assembled, and wear being loaded on to Spirits and phantoms. The group made there way to a Phantom that was near the hangar bay doors. He removed the crew of lesser Elites from command and 2 other Elites dressed in commando armor got on to the phantom. they manned the turrets, while the other 2 stayed close to Sha'Karr.

the Redemption dropped out of Slip space in front of a Covernant planet with several Css-Cruisers in Orbit. The Regret and Harbinger unleashed a volley of fire ageist the unsuspecting Fleet while the Redemption Fire several salvoes of torpedoes at several Ships, tiring not to get hit to protect it's cargo.

The Redemptions hangar bay doors opened and hundreds of fighter craft sworned out of the hangars of Redemption. the Armada of fighters and bombers devastated the fleet and several surviving ships broke of and retreated. the remaining ships all consternated there fire on the weakened Regret and destroyed her over the planets Atmosphere and the hull soon fell in and crashed into the planets surface.
"Sha'Karr to all craft launch" the invasion fleet left the hangars of the Redemption and headed for the planet. with little to resistance they reached the planets Atmosphere.
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Post by Caboose on Tue Jun 15, 2010 6:31 am

Sorry pressed post not preview
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Post by SilverShadows on Tue Jun 15, 2010 6:58 am

huh?


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Post by Caboose on Tue Jun 15, 2010 7:08 am

instead of pressing Preview I pressed Post so I ended up posting part of it
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Post by SilverShadows on Tue Jun 15, 2010 7:40 am

oh ok


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Post by Caboose on Tue Jun 15, 2010 3:38 pm

Sha'Karr's Phantom was leading the fleet, 4 phantoms could be seen being lurched from the wreckage of the regret as its orbit decayed. Sha'Karr was about to order a salvage team when the wreck fell into the atmosphere and burned up."She, is gone... it is up to us now" Sha'Karr said as the rest of the defending fleet jumped away "Sha'Karr to Redemption, Call for 2 carries there counter attack will be heavy "
"Aye,Sir" an elite said.

Sha'Karr and 50 other Phantoms and Spirits started there decent into the planets atmosphere. It was then when several large energy bolts came throw the clouds and hit the Flotilla Sha'Karr rushed throw the clouds to see a heavy AA emplacement. "Alpha Group break off and flank the south Omega Group Break off and Flank the West Flank. Rest of you head on to target."Sha'Karr set an collision course with one of the guns as he and the other Sangheili put on some jump packs and jumped out of the phantom just as it collied with the gun. severally damaging the in the process, it went to fire, but as it charged up the gun over heated and blew up. The Shock wave killed most of the surrendering Covenant forces and destroyed most of surrounding country side. "Ha Ha it will take more than that to kill me" Sha'Karr gloated as he and his team landed on a near by rock face.

Because of the gap in the defence the remaining phantoms pawed throw with one of the spirits stopping and dropping off 5 Ghosts and flew off. Sha'Karr and his commandos got in them, and followed the Flotilla of ships as they prawed throw till they got to a guard post which was full of Covenant forces, mainly grunts and brutes. One commando boosted his ghosts into the base blowing up some plasma coils and sending some of the garrison flying, he then ran up to the post activating his energy sword in the process he jumped over the wall. Sha'Karr and the other Sangheili waited for him to return, not really caring for the commandos safety, after a few minutes a Brute captain was thrown over the wall. The group rawred in cheerer for there fellow Sangheilis achievement.

He burst throw the wall in a brute chopper and pulled up next to Sha'Karr "you did good my friend if only every Sangheili was like you" Sha'Karr said as he patted the Sangheili on the back, the group then drove off to a city which was showing smoke because of the invasion mounted by the Sangheili, "Redemption to Sha'Karr" an Sangheili said over the comm system on his Ghost "go head" He replied, Those 2 Carries you requested are here one is coming to land reinforcements and the other to support the space fleet" The Sangheili said as the carrier could be seen coming down over the city. As the Carrier launched fighters and reinforcements a Scarab dropped from orbit into the carrier, It's claws dug into the carrier as is started to rip it apart as it moved to the centre area of the ship. several fighters made a few runs on it but had no effect. it got to the bridge and burst into it with one of its legs, destroying the bridge and the Carrier dropped into the city destroying it. Sha'Karr stopped a few miles a away from the city, seeing the City burn. his crew not knowing weather it was defeat or victory stayed quite. "call for a Phantom we have to return to the Redemption. Sha'Karr to Redemption call back all the forces" Sha'Karr sadly said.

His men said nothing as a Phantom came and picked them up, they stayed quite till they arrived on the Redemption and Sha'Karr dismissed them. Sha'Karr returned to his quarters, took off his armor and put up his weapons and put his casual clothing on. he put a general notice on the ship to not be disturbed.
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