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Post by Skembri on Mon Aug 10, 2009 8:57 am

www.thebrokenmirror.webs.com the completed advert tell me what you think
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Re: Bm2 Advertisment Complete

Post by SilverShadows on Mon Aug 10, 2009 10:02 am

have you actually changed it at all ?
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Post by Skembri on Mon Aug 10, 2009 8:08 pm

waatch it
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Post by foofong1 on Mon Aug 10, 2009 10:34 pm

Not to sound harsh or anything, but, it's not very good....I don't know any other way to put this...i just don't think it looks very professional or good. It looks like it was slapped together in 5 minutes...i mean, where to start;

The backgrounds, the orange and purple things...whats up with those? they look a bit crap tbh :S and they don't let you read the text as it goes white in the middle, which is what colour the text is.
The BM symbol, when it spinds it is very obviously being reset each time it spins - makes it look amature when you should give a professional finish to it.
A lot of the effects were unnecessary, and just made it look basic and amature.

I'm sorry but i would just imagine an 'ad' for any BM game to be of high quality, like DW's.

I think you needed to hear it straight, because if i don't tell you, then when other people see it they'll tell you...en mass.

Maybe you should let josh do it?

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Post by SilverShadows on Mon Aug 10, 2009 11:59 pm

i did one but i wasnt sure what it should say but overwise ive already got one
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Re: Bm2 Advertisment Complete

Post by flashtrek on Tue Aug 11, 2009 1:33 am

sweet
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Post by Skembri on Tue Aug 11, 2009 1:34 am

tbh foofong it was a five min job and i think its alrite i could make it better im replaceing the spinning bit anyway and i'll just remake i from scratch

but i need some other screenshots
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Post by flashtrek on Tue Aug 11, 2009 1:40 am

ill try to get some other screen shots

add my msn
neils_lawn_cutting@hotmail.com
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Post by foofong1 on Tue Aug 11, 2009 5:59 am

I am sorry i sounded harsh, but not sorry about the point i was making.

I'm not trying to discourage you from doing stuff just maybe let josh do it on this one? Razz

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Post by SilverShadows on Tue Aug 11, 2009 6:06 am

if he wants to do it thats fine if you want to see what i did ill show you
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Post by Skembri on Tue Aug 11, 2009 6:11 am

thats just the one vex did with ur pics on it
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Post by SilverShadows on Tue Aug 11, 2009 6:12 am

yes and no but is got new text aswell darkwing also used vexs
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Post by Skembri on Tue Aug 11, 2009 6:16 am

i used it on my other project and tbh its not even that good
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Post by SilverShadows on Tue Aug 11, 2009 6:17 am

ah well its not finished that just a starting point
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Post by Skembri on Tue Aug 11, 2009 6:30 am

how did u get it onto the forum??
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Post by SilverShadows on Tue Aug 11, 2009 6:36 am

i uploaded it to my old site and used the address to stream the flash. but ive decided im gonna make a completely new video on the lines of dark wings
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Post by Mr.Borg on Tue Aug 11, 2009 9:59 am

Guys if you want I can send the URL bm2complete webs...to google server..and lots oters.
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Post by SilverShadows on Tue Aug 11, 2009 10:00 am

bm2complete.webs? were brokenmirror.forummotion.co.uk now i think i posted bm2 complete on google i dont know if they accepted
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Re: Bm2 Advertisment Complete

Post by Mr.Borg on Wed Aug 12, 2009 12:52 am

I can get it on like 6 different serch engines.
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Re: Bm2 Advertisment Complete

Post by SilverShadows on Wed Aug 12, 2009 8:58 am

ok good idea that should increase our members
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Post by Skembri on Wed Aug 12, 2009 7:22 pm

can i just say when i do what you told me tyo with streaming it from my site it just ses (when right cliked) movie not loadeed and it doesnt load
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Post by SilverShadows on Wed Aug 12, 2009 11:31 pm

you click on in in your frewebs libary and it opens another page and gopy and paste that addres in to the box thingy
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Post by Skembri on Thu Aug 13, 2009 12:45 am

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Post by SilverShadows on Thu Aug 13, 2009 12:47 am

yeh its a lot better than the old one not sure about the font but yeah its good
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Post by Skembri on Thu Aug 13, 2009 12:51 am

ill give u the source code if u want to keep that but change the font otherwise i cba with it
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